tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post1226539819862133097..comments2024-03-12T17:50:06.899+00:00Comments on Fiction Fascination: Prohibited Passion by Alyssa Linn Palmer - Blog TourCarlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06968435613019283463noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-66874035596114734532023-11-25T17:38:39.515+00:002023-11-25T17:38:39.515+00:00The forbidden romance between Ruth and CeeCee, set...The forbidden romance between Ruth and CeeCee, set against the backdrop of Bandit Creek and the challenges posed by both Ruth's strict upbringing and CeeCee's dangerous association, creates a tension that can keep readers eagerly turning the pages.<br /><br />Here are a few elements you might consider incorporating or developing further in your story:<br /><br /> Setting Atmosphere: Since your story is set in the era of speakeasies and gangsters, consider delving into the atmosphere of that time. Describe the sights, sounds, and smells of the speakeasy, the fashion of the flapper era, and the overall mood of Bandit Creek.<br /><br /> Character Backstories: Explore the backgrounds of Ruth and CeeCee to give readers a deeper understanding of their motivations and the challenges they face. What led CeeCee to <a href="https://hdpcgames.com/blur-pc-game-download/" rel="nofollow">blur pc download</a><br /> <a href="https://hdpcgames.com/the-last-of-us-pc-free-download/" rel="nofollow">the last of us download </a><br />Hdpcgameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11443224470062465360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-86998188179119659562021-12-18T10:31:36.206+00:002021-12-18T10:31:36.206+00:00As Ruth gets drawn further into their world, she m...As Ruth gets drawn further into their world, she must decide between her familiar life and a new, dangerous path with the woman she loves.<br /><a href="http://www.itsitgroup.com/services/web-development-vancouver/" rel="nofollow">web development in vancouver</a> , <br /><a href="http://www.itsitgroup.com/services/web-development-vancouver/" rel="nofollow">best website developers vancouver</a> , <br />sateen sheet sethttp://www.thecollectionmarts.com/product-category/bedding/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-90599086052046168712012-02-07T01:52:33.046+00:002012-02-07T01:52:33.046+00:00Thanks for having me, Carly! :)Thanks for having me, Carly! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-58642265423061707342012-02-06T16:36:26.186+00:002012-02-06T16:36:26.186+00:00Talk about secrets and lies. This story had all th...Talk about secrets and lies. This story had all that and more. The secret of being a lesbian at that era in such a small community, and the lie being lived every day behind the facade of expected heterosexuality. Good story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-86366802784830508422012-02-06T15:47:03.935+00:002012-02-06T15:47:03.935+00:00It's on my e-reader in my TBR list and I'm...It's on my e-reader in my TBR list and I'm really looking forward to getting into it. I like that you didn't know until the end how it would go. Makes writing more fun that way! Congrats on the great reviews for this book!Michelle Beattiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10495864149749607764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-306025317297603482012-02-06T15:22:38.953+00:002012-02-06T15:22:38.953+00:00I've read this book and the conflict is great....I've read this book and the conflict is great. Not only the love triangle but the conflict within Ruth. You're obviously a very talented author. Please let me know when your next book is out.Roxy Boroughshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16628693047992126654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-31753240048904013362012-02-06T14:09:25.803+00:002012-02-06T14:09:25.803+00:00I agree Alyssa. With two characters, some actions ...I agree Alyssa. With two characters, some actions *can* become predictable. With three, the interactions and pecking order are always interesting.<br /><br />Great post! :)Jillhttp://jillcflanagan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-684138627549817427.post-77759443373791514992012-02-06T14:06:24.647+00:002012-02-06T14:06:24.647+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11876646527579767550noreply@blogger.com